Below is written feedback that we recieved after we asked a group of people to watch our rough cut. We gave them two pieces of paper, one for which they had to write likes/dislikes down either side of the page and comment as watching, then another piece of paper for once they had finished watching it to sum up what they had watched and give us improvements we could make for our final cut. This was really helpful and we took all advice and criticism on board in order to make our final cut stronger, after all it is our target audience we have to impress as they would be the ones watching it.