My double page spread got a few criticisms of which are listed below, this feedback was from both year 13's and my fellow peers:

 

-Add another polaroid photo to fill up more space

- Add a pull quote

- Add my title

- Move the writing down so it takes up more room so theres less empty space

- Make the main image bigger

- Make the polaroid photos slightly bigger

- Make the page numbers slightly bigger

- Add a drops cap

 

I worked hard and finished my double page spread taking on board the criticism given.